יום רביעי, 27 במאי 2009

Final Assessment

Dear Gal,
Your blog is nice. I am glad that it was a little bit of a challenge for you. I only allowed it to be about the same book because it is a new project. Your English writing needs improvement!!! You MUST use spell check! The mistakes don't belong in your level of English. You just need to take care with capital letters, contractions and grammar. You can do it if you put some effort into it.
Your final grade is 85.
Yours,
Karen Noll Stanger

יום ראשון, 17 במאי 2009

That was harder work then a book report but I rather do this because like that i dont need to another book and i dont like to read i think it is worthwhile because it is a more intresting to do this than do the same thing all the time i learned from this assigments more about my book and now i know evry thing about it.

יום שבת, 9 במאי 2009

questions

? what dan allways want to ride on

? what is the name of grace chaills cat

 ? did dan love his sister

? how much muney did amy chail burn

? did amy love her brother

? what did dan do that his sister was very angree and she didnt trust him any more

? how much paks of skittels dan ate 

? what is special in the numbers 3  5  7  11  13

? who is elister HO

?  in what air port they flyed to london

? after who they folloed in london

? what is the worst thing that amy is afrade of


Enter The Book

if i was joining the characters in the book i wiil bring with me a gun to kill all the bad peple a pillow and because i wont have a lot time to sleep i wiil also take a picture of my family that i will not miss them and i wiil take food and water you naver know if i will love there food 
Diary

Dear Diary                                                                                                                             13\7\08

today me and amy found a clue and amy trusted me that i will take care of him but I lost it it fekt out from my bag. amy shouted at me and I shouted back at her and now we are all mestup. i feel very bad about what I did and I dont know how me and amy can continue the jurny again. I will keep wrighting to you.

love you Dan 

 
The Ending
Amy and Dan found the clue and thet are very happy but sudenly they rilised that they have a missing clue but they remembered that they had all 39 clues. They started to look for the missing clue and sudenly they saw a helicopter flying over them and shooting on theme they knew that the gays in the helicoptar stool there clue but they didnt know what to do they hided in an anbonded house and whene that they saw that the helicopter landed they got into it and amy and dan flyed with helicopter they found the missing clue and saved the family power   

יום ראשון, 3 במאי 2009

the plot


The plot of my story is when Grace Chaill dies and Dan and Amy start there journey and there race to the 39 clue. right there the story starts to complacate and evrything starts to be more intresting. the turning point of the story is when Dan started to realize that he and hi siter are in danger and they start to work together and togethe they do all the things better and they beet the dificulty and thene the story tared to change.